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Wow, that blurb is actually really good!

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It needs work, but is MUCH better than what I'd do!

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Excellent info in this article. As a self-publisher I relate. The main obstacle I'm also finding is the marketing. If I could get some robot to take that over while I get back to making art, I'd be overjoyed.

In regards to covers, the overview choice is the best of the 3, but maybe there's a better representation that's more dynamic, up-close, and relatable. Perhaps a layout that's a collage of people and unique local architecture/sights? Granted, it's a far more difficult illustration, but I'm just putting it out there to help you dig deeper on other marketable cover ideas.

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Regarding the cover, I think the red ship one would be a great contrasting eye catcher for when browsing either on a webstore or physical store. But yeah it looks like a themed book. So I think the second image but zoomed into the docks (lower left square) where you can see the red ship the docks and part of the city would be a great mix of your 3 versions and intentions

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17 hrs ago·edited 17 hrs agoLiked by Alex Hallatt

I agree with the AI that an overview of Lyttleton gives the reader a better idea of what the book is about rather than an illo that focuses on a boat or boats, but am not crazy about the drawing. Your cartoons are charming, but this image wouldn't hook me. You're right - the big red boat is eye-catching - and it focuses too much on one aspect of the town. FWIW, I did an image search with DuckDuckGo using the terms "travel book covers," which returned several similar covers depicting a person in the foreground with his/her back to reader, facing the place s/he is about to explore - a road to the mountains, a river valley, a cityscape. Since several popped up maybe this is overdone? Another cover involved drawings of a bunch of representative figures inside a representative item (a teacup stuffed with the Eiffel Tower, Big Ben and other famous buildings). You might put Lyttleton icons - whatever those are (people, buildings, animals) - inside a tugboat as it floats in the harbor or by a prominent point? (Maybe too busy?) Just a thought, if you want to invest more time on it.

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19 hrs agoLiked by Alex Hallatt

Middle drawing is the correct one. I agree with the AI on this!

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I recently retired as a copy editor, and I like how you’re using AI. Your process combines the best of carbon and silicon.

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I like how you use carbon and silicon.

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14 hrs ago·edited 14 hrs agoAuthor

Thanks for all the feedback. If I get time before launch, I'll work on the cover, but the good thing is you can change book covers without changing ISBNs, listiings, reviews, etc.

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Fascinating that Claude can “read” an image and provide its preference.

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I know - that's what freaked me out.

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